Sunday,15 April 2007
Hi, another day is gone by,I've just finished watching tv and drinking a cup of hot milk.
This day has been another warm day.Beti enjoyed herself with her friends and with Fog,the new entry.Sorry if I didn't tell about Fog before,but I've been very busy since he arrived last Saturday. Fog is a wonderful rabbit that Simon and Tash bought to Beti,he is champagne color and shaggy and he is a very sweet rabbit!! Beti looks very happy and I hope she will be always like that!!
I love seeing Beti and her friends playing and laughing because this makes me feel very peaceful!
Tomorrow will be a hard day for her,because she is restarting school in the morning after two weeks holidays,and in the afternoon we are going to Kumon again..Beti doesn't like very much it,but I will try to make she happy!!
This afternoon Tash and I went to Bicester Village for shopping and we spent two hours there. I have never been there before,even if,one of my English university professor,who had been living in Oxford since last winter,told me about it when he knew I would came in Bicester as "au pair". It is said to be one of the most famous shop in the Oxfordshire.
All the family had a good day today and I wish this is a good starts for a very good week!
Now I will go to bed,but I'd like to read some think before I be asleep.
See you tomorrow,
Anna Lisa.
1 comment:
Dear Anna Lisa,
This is another very good diary entry and your English is improving all the time!
Most of what you have written is perfect. There are just a few little things which could be altered. Here are some comments that I hope will be helpful:
Fog, the new arrival. (We would say ‘arrival’ not ‘entry’.)
Tell you about Fog (‘you’ before ‘about’)
Bought for Beti (‘for’ instead of ‘to’)
Beti doesn’t like it very much (‘it’ before ‘very’), but I will try to make her happy (‘her’ instead of ‘she’)
Even though (‘though’ instead of ‘if’)
When he knew I would be coming to Bicester (‘would be coming to’)
I hope this will be a good start to a very good week
Something (not ‘some think’) before I go to sleep.
When you take your exam at university, you will get top marks!
Best wishes,
Terri
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