Friday,20th July 2007
Hi !!!
I wrote my blog three days ago and I remember very well I promised you I would have written my blog frequently,so...I'm doing it now because I'd like to update you about my life,if you like
:-)
I was studing English for my next exam just five minutes ago,but now I'm tired to study and I want dedicate time to myself,to relax and to play with my dog,Haidy.
Yesterday evening I went to the beach for tea time with my friends and I had a swim in the sunset,it was very nice and my heart felt so soft and joyful,the water of the sea was calm and not very cold and the sky had a very beautyful shade of colours!
We had a nice tea and a nice time all together.We sat around the fire eating grilled and fried fishes that two friends of mine fished the day before yesterday whit our boat called Gina.
Now I'd like to have a snack,so I'm going to eat a piece of a good cake that it was done by Giovanna,she is a friends of my family.
Tomorrow morning I'm going to Canosa in Puglia,this city is one hour far away from Bari and I'm going there because I'm going to do the community service and tomorrow there will be the selection.
I will be the community service at the local tourist office in Conversano and I'm very happy because I will have the opportunity to speak English and Spanish languages.
I'll write to you soon,just to inform you about the selection.
Have a good day,
Anna Lisa.
1 comment:
Hi Anna Lisa,
You are very lucky that you can spend time on the beach - the weather in England has been terrible for weeks - rain, rain and more rain! Lots of people are homeless because of floods!
Anyway, I can see that you are feeling more confident about your English now that you have got back into the habit of writing your blog!
You've got nothing to worry about - your English is still very good!
Here are some alterations:
I wrote my blog three days ago and I remember very well I promised you I would WRITE my blog frequently,so...I'm doing it now because I'd like to update you about my life,if you like
:-)
I was studYing English for my next exam just five minutes ago,but now I'm tired OF STUDYING and I want TO dedicate time to myself,to relax and to play with my dog,Haidy.
Yesterday evening I went to the beach for tea time with my friends and I had a swim in the sunset,it was very nice and my heart felt so soft and joyful,the water of the sea was calm and not very cold and the sky had very beautIful shadeS of colours!
We had a nice tea and a nice time all together.We sat around the fire eating grilled and fried fishes that two friends of mine (we would say 'CAUGHT' instead of 'fished') the day before yesterday with our boat called Gina.
Now I'd like to have a snack,so I'm going to eat a piece of a good cake that (omit 'it') was MADE by Giovanna,she is a friend of my family.
Tomorrow morning I'm going to Canosa in Puglia. This city is one hour (omit 'far') away from Bari and I'm going there because I'm going to do (omit 'the') community service and tomorrow there will be A selection.
I will be DOING (omit 'the') community service at the local tourist office in Conversano and I'm very happy because I will have the opportunity to speak English and Spanish languages.
I'll write to you soon,just to inform you about the selection.
Have a good day,
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