Wednesday, 11 April,
I'm thinking that when I speak in English I'm not very good because I don't want that the person who speaking with me feels bored waiting for me,so I speak quickly and I throw out the first think I've in my mind..it's strange to explain,but the fact remains that the people who chat with me don't understand very well me. Well I've noticed that all depends on the circumstances and on the people, when I speak with a person who make me feel serene I'm able to speak well because I'm feel relaxed!!
Anyway..I have to be content because this is a good position for me.If I only think what I was one month ago..my English was a completely disaster!! I wasn't able to put together few words to form a sense sentence!
Now is better than before,there is no doubt!
I hope to keep my daily improving up.
See you,
Anna Lisa.
1 comment:
Dear Anna Lisa,
This is another very good blog entry. There are only a few small mistakes. These are:
1. I don’t want the person who is speaking with me to feel bored waiting for me
2. I’ve noticed that it all depends
3. speak with a person who makes
4. because I feel relaxed
5. what I was like one month
6. a complete disaster
7. together a few words
8. I hope to keep improving daily
As you can see these are only very minor alterations.
1. instead of ‘feels bored’, you should write ‘to feel bored’
2. You missed out the word ‘it’ before ‘all depends’
3. ‘make’ should be ‘makes’
4. instead of ‘I’m feel’ you should write ‘I feel’
5. you missed out the word ‘like’ before ‘one month’
6. instead of ‘completely’ you should write ‘complete’
7. you missed out the word ‘a’ before ‘few words’
I hope this helps.
Best wishes,
Terri
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