Monday, 2 April 2007

My first blog page

2nd of April,
Hi all,
this is my first diary page I have been writing since I'm here,in England.
You wandering why,well,all started this morning after a little and nice chat with Simon's mother who told me that my English is improving,so she proposed me to start a daily diary to exercise myself to write in English,and..here I am,I'm writing my first diary's page!
It's so nice I've got a blog now!
Has happened a lot of thing since when I'm in Whitaker house,we moved in a new house after a week from my arrive,we had a party in the new house with a lot of friends of Simon and Tash and one day we had lost our dear George for three longs days!! In the same period Lilly was ill so we decided to bring her to the vet so Poppy had been stayed alone for three days..not very nice situation! All this follow Tash's travels,now she is in South Africa,but in the last two weeks she went to Philipines and Dubay for work.
In this period Beti's school is closed so she is preparing a fantastic musical named Hight School Musical and this morning I saw her and two friends of her dancing and I was remembering when I was 10,I was like them,a little girl who loved dancing and got dressed with shining clothes..lovely memories!!
It has been a sunny day today and I love the sun because it give me a charge to have a good day with myself and others people.
It's 20:48 now,and just few minutes ago went Beti in the studio room to give me a pass to enter in her bedroom,she gave the same pass to her dad because she wants we knock to her bedroom door and show the pass before to enter!! She is a very nice and funny girl.
Ok guys the time is flying writing..and I'm asleep so I'm going to close my beautiful blog and I wish tomorrow I come back and write in.
See you soon
Anna Lisa.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Dear Anna Lisa,
This is very good. Well done!
I've written it with some alterations. If you compare what you have written with what I have written, you will see the differences and I hope this will be helpful.
Keep up the good work.
Best wishes,
Terri (Simon's mother)
Although we say ‘2nd of April’, we write ‘2nd April’ – we leave the ‘of’ out.
'wandering' has a different meaning to 'wondering' although they are pronounced the same. Words that are pronounced the same but have a different meaning are called 'homophones'
Hi All,
This is the first diary page I have written since I arrived here, in England. You will be wondering why. Well, it all started this morning after a nice little chat with Simon’s mother who told me that my English is improving and she suggested that I start a daily diary as an exercise for writing in English, so here I am, I’m writing my first diary page! It’s so nice I’ve got a blog now!
A lot of things have happened since I arrived at the Whitaker’s. After my first week we moved into a new house. We had a party in the new house with lots of friends of Simon and Tash.
One day we lost our dear George for three long days!! At the same time Lilly was ill, so we decided to take her to the vet. Poppy was alone for three days – not a very nice situation!
During the last two weeks Tash was working in the Philipines and Dubay. This week she is in South Africa.
This week and next week Beti’s school is closed. She is preparing a fantastic musical called High School Musical and this morning I saw her and two of her friends dancing. I remembered when I was ten and I was like them, a little girl who loved dancing and getting dressed with shining clothes – lovely memories!!
It has been a sunny day today and I love the sun because it gives me a chance to have a good day on my own and with other people.
It’s 20:48 now and just a few minutes ago Beti went into the studio room to give me a pass to enter her bedroom. She gave her dad a pass too, because she wants us to knock on her bedroom door and show the pass before we enter!! She is a very nice and funny girl.
OK guys, the time is flying and I’m sleepy, so I’m going to close my beautiful blog and tomorrow I will write some more.
See you soon,
Anna Lisa