Friday,27th April 2007
Letter:
Dear Mary,
I'm sorry if I haven't written to you lately,but I've worked hard since I received your last letter. I've been selected as main character for my school's play,then I had been on holiday for a week with my friends.I wanted send you a card,but I had forgotten your address at home.How is your school? You didn't tell me in the least about your school in your letter. Would you still come here during Christmas holiday? Ah,I was forgetting that I've just passed my driving test and by the time you will come here,my parents will have bought ..guess what?...a car just for me!! Is it wonderful,isn't it?
Well,I don't want you waste your time,
speak to you soon,
Jen.
1 comment:
Hi Anna Lisa,
Another good exercise. As you can see, there are only a few small errors. Well done.
Dear Mary,
I'm sorry if I haven't written to you lately,but I've BEEN WORKING hard since I received your last letter. I've been selected as THE main character for my school's play,then I HAVE been on holiday for a week with my friends.I wanted TO send you a card,but I had forgotten your address at home.How is your school? You didn't tell me ANYTHING about your school in your letter. Would you still come here during THE Christmas holiday? Ah,I was forgetting that I've just passed my driving test and by the time you (no 'will') come here,my parents will have bought ..guess what?...a car just for me!! IT IS wonderful,isn't it?
Well,I don't want TO waste your time.
Speak to you soon,
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